Looks pretty good for your first proper flash cartoon! The backgrounds look really nice! My only recommendation would be to work on motion just a bit! Not that it wasn't good, but putting more frames would add to the fluidity of the animation. All in all, a well-made cartoon!
Awesome! I appreciate the honesty, and while we were being honest, that's what I had most difficulty on in the process of making the cartoon! (Not including all of the confusing symbols I tortured myself with)
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